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19 October 2009 @ 11:36 am
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The things I get to write, now that Dem has a wife and cute little daughter in the new draft:

Reaper suddenly stiffened, his attention turning to the hallway ahead of them. A large, muscular figure stepped around the corner. His head was shaved, his features strong and masculine. Dark skinned and blue eyed, he wore a neatly tailored suit in pale gray.

Dem, Reaper’s brother, and the only other killer on the ship.

With a smudge on his collar of something that looked suspiciously like peanut butter.
 
 
Current Mood: pleasedpleased
 
 
 
The Proverbial Bull in a China Shop...sabaceanbabe on October 19th, 2009 06:41 pm (UTC)
Hee! :D
Patron Saint of Pessimismwoodrunner on October 19th, 2009 07:57 pm (UTC)
LOL! Love that line!